Global Bookworms
  • Home
  • Services
    • Developmental Editing
    • Line Editing
    • Copyediting
    • Proofreading
    • Additional Services >
      • Content Editing Bundle
      • Comprehensive Edit Bundle
      • Reviews
  • About
  • FAQ
  • Blog
  • Contact Us
  • Sample Edit
  • Home
  • Services
    • Developmental Editing
    • Line Editing
    • Copyediting
    • Proofreading
    • Additional Services >
      • Content Editing Bundle
      • Comprehensive Edit Bundle
      • Reviews
  • About
  • FAQ
  • Blog
  • Contact Us
  • Sample Edit

Read With Us


"No entertainment is so cheap as reading, nor any pleasure so lasting"
-Mary Wortley Montagu

'The ISIS Gambit'

11/24/2020

0 Comments

 
Picture
★★★

Since When Did Foreign Terrorists...

...speak as if they were born in the good old U.S. of A? 
When reading the dialogue of the sub commander and his officer (I'm assuming it's a submarine here), I quickly realized that their names were Russian and they were speaking about the Americans, but they talked without a hint of a Russian accent. Makes it difficult to distinguish the good guys from the terrorist nations if they all talk alike. Here's an example: 
     (Turkish) "Not a problem, General...I wanted to be a part of the discussion."
     (Russian) "Mr. President, I'm terribly sorry to hear what happened yesterday."

The plot was good and well-paced, but dragged in some parts. The characters weren't great; cookie cutter, but it's hard to write military personnel without sounding ​cliché. The dialogue wasn't horrible, which helped, except that every person in every nation spoke the same (as mentioned already.) Mechanically, it was done really well.

​Overall, not a bad effort, but if you're going to write an international novel, at least try to research 
0 Comments



Leave a Reply.

    How many stars lost or gained?

    Picture

    Genres:

    All
    0 Stars
    1 Star
    2 Stars
    3 Stars
    4 Stars
    5 Stars
    Action
    Adult
    Adventure
    Applied Psychology
    Auditing
    Aviation
    Bilingual
    Biographies
    Bookkeeping
    Buddhism
    Business
    Celtic/Gaia
    Children's
    Christianity
    Clean/Wholesome
    Comedy/Humor
    Comics/Graphic Novels
    Conspiracy
    Cooking
    Crime
    Devotional
    Do-It-Yourself
    Educational
    Exercise/Fitness
    Fairy Tale
    Fantasy
    Fiction
    Friendship
    Games/Brain Teasers
    Gardening
    Grief And Bereavement
    Health & Wellness
    Herbal/Alternative Medicine
    History
    Horror/Creepy
    Juvenile
    Manga/Anime
    Math
    Memoirs
    Music
    Mysteries
    Mythology
    Nature
    Non Fiction
    Occult
    Paranormal
    Parenting & Relationships
    Personal Finance
    Personal Growth
    Pet Care
    Pneumatology
    Poetry
    Politics
    Post Apocalyptic
    Psychological
    Psychology
    Reference
    Romance
    Saga
    Science
    Science Fiction
    Self Help
    Short Story/Stories
    Small Business
    Strength Training
    Supernatural
    Suspense
    Sustainable Living
    Taoism
    Theology
    Thriller
    Time Management
    Time Travel
    Travel
    War & Military
    Yoga
    Young Adult


    Archives

    January 2023
    December 2022
    November 2022
    October 2022
    September 2022
    August 2022
    July 2022
    May 2022
    April 2022
    March 2022
    January 2022
    December 2021
    November 2021
    October 2021
    September 2021
    August 2021
    July 2021
    June 2021
    May 2021
    April 2021
    March 2021
    February 2021
    January 2021
    December 2020
    November 2020
    October 2020
    September 2020
    August 2020
    July 2020

    RSS Feed

We are open Monday - Saturday
Closed Sundays and Federal Holidays

Services

Developmental Editing

Line Editing

Copyediting

Proofreading

Content Editing Bundle

Comprehensive Edit Bundle

About Us

FAQ

Blog

Contact Us

emailIcon
linkedinIcon
facebookIcon
goodreadsIcon