...I picked up the book to read because the covers of this series are well-done.
I wish I hadn't though, especially when I realized I'd read the first book not many months ago and didn't appreciate the choppy writing, the infantile dialogue, the misspelled words, the nonsensical sentences...and sadly, this one was no different.
I simply could not feel for the characters and though the story has great potential, it lacks in too many other areas to make it a truly enjoyable read.
To this author I would say, get your books edited and worthy of the creative covers. As they stand now, they are not worth reading.