Shorter Story Than You Think
Even though the ebook is only 46 pages, the last 18 pages are a sneak peak at another of the author's works. So, this is really a short story.
I Can't Quite Put My Finger On It
Maybe it's the tense in which the book is written, maybe it's the lack of details or the less-than-realistic dialogue, I don't know for certain. Maybe it's all three. But the pacing, plot, dialogue and tense make this book tedious to read.
I absolutely loved Nicki Redstone: fierce protector with a level of humanity that many female protagonists fail to achieve.