Riddled with too many issues for such a short read.
2 Stars | Adult | Short Story | Science Fiction | Fantasy
First, this is only 79 Kindle pages long, since it's double-spaced (looks more like triple-spaced), it would actually be closer to 40 pages in length and took me less than 15 minutes to read. Each "chapter" was maybe ten kindle pages (less if you remove the massive spacing).
There were way too many errors for a book this length.
-Plot: There wasn't one, or at least not a complete one. All that seemed to be happening was a lot of shooting at a black gooey creature with tentacles.
-Dialogue: Unreal and confusing.
-Character interaction: unrealistic and stilted.
-Mechanics? Riddled with errors. Example - missing words (i.e. "He threw his gun at and then continued running" "he over on his back" "Colton signaled with hand").
Why, oh why, did this book get published and why in the name of all that's holy are people rating it five stars?
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